Sunday, July 02, 2006

Stranger


And yet another one bites the dust

I see people come and I see people go
I stand watching with hopeless trust
Around me
A residue of memories, revolving so fast, so slow

‘Savour the moment’
Cause it’s not always to be
It’s no random lament
I know it’s not meant to be
It’s not setting me free
Oh, let me be!
Struggling to free
From a love that’s chained me

A wound, so deep that cannot be healed
With a kiss of love, is sealed
The rapturous dream ravaging my senses
The truth jolts me from my pretenses

The bee of truth has a fatal sting
You’d wished for the fateful words
To have never touched those lips
It’s too late now
To seal those lips with a blissful kiss

What good is a truth that bereaves without a death?
Left me unshielded; high and dry
And as I stand unruly, facing harsh wind and sky
Tumultuous thoughts jeering me by
Hissing at my foolishness,
“Don’t you dare fall in love and then cry!”

I think of the lone ranger, who met known strangers,
“I’m just a traveler who met you on your sojourn,” said he,
I gave myself to him, blissfully unaware one day he would flee.
It’s just a lovelorn youth’s lament,
Not ready to learn, is her imprudence adamant.

A ruthless maneuver by life,
The void you left is now filled by a hounding strife.
With you gone, I feel a waste,
My sinful folly, of having been in such haste.

The rain can’t cleanse me of your touch
I ask the waters to burn my skin
The calmness outside,
Leaves me churning within

I don’t belong
Who am I?
I am a stranger longing for love
A love that’s lost.

I knew a person once
Knew, well enough, only to know
That he’s a stranger
My stranger, a lone ranger.

And you should never love a stranger…


27 comments:

Kay Vee said...

My renewed attempt at poem writing after almost 5 years!
:D
i hope it makes sense!

Harsh said...

The real point of any poem is not that it should make sense, unless you write for global (or even sectorial) appeal. Those who write to sell should consider sense and sensibility behind their words.
If you write to clean yourself or to appease something that's making you uncomfortable from within, or just to pen down ticklish (or tear-wrenching) thoughts that came to you in the shower or in the middle of your bite into a cheeseburger, you shouldn't worry about it making sense.
Let it flow, and leave others to make of it what they will. For you, your song should just ring out as you want it to. Raw yet pure, and always a joy to look back to.

karmic said...

Well, that is very well written and impressive. Keep writing. :)

Aditi said...

Well written .. written from the heart and its honesty reflects through..
"Dont you dare fall in love and then cry"

Hmm a lotta food for thought.. keep writing its good

suraj sharma said...

fellow blogger. you write extreamly well. lovely poem.

Anonymous said...

shitrint... loved ur poem. am very dim at poetry... but that made a lot of sense to me. in so many damn ways...

stranger is a strange word. that is something i am certain of. for how else is it that i find myself caring so much for strangers, and how else is it that i find they understand me so much better than the people around me sometimes do???

"And you should never love a stranger..." - i politely disagree. i have done so. and i will continue to do so. not necessarily in a romantic way, but i love them. strange na? not a clue who they are, what they do, how old they are, anything... and you find urself connecting with them...

ahhh ur poem really touched me (in fact, if i ever get round to writing a blog, i was going to write something on strangers myself... great minds gurl!:D)

maybe it's because i am slightly strange myself that i seem to find myself amongst strangers... haha!

Kay Vee said...

@ harsh:
thanks yaar for all the words of encouragement! :D
u write pretty well too...i have you blogrolled!
thanks for visiting.
:)

@karmic_jay:
hey thanks yaar!

aditi:
hmm...thats interesting to know that my poem is food for thought...
yeah..its a poem of honesty coupled with drama and fiction!
:P


@surajsharma:
hey thanks for coming by...
glad u liked the poem!

@ o anon reader:
i completely agree with u anon abt the stranger part and how we share important details of our lives with complete strangers....abt how we connect with someone so unknown..

the stranger im talking abt is, how in spite of knowing some ppl so long u still feel a discord, as if u know the person factually not on the mental/spiritual level...for example how u might hav felt lonely in spite of being in a crowd..becoz theres no one really who u wud relate to or someone relating to u!

i hope u get my point...i gel quite well with some strangers at times! :P

do start a blog buddy..i wanna see u write!
:D

elfstone said...

why do i feel like "And yet another one bites the dust" is inappropriate for the mood of the poem? :P and the last part of it reminded me of the "Ek Ajnabee" title track .. theone where arjun rampal looks silly in the discotheque

:D

Kay Vee said...

maybe ur right elf...
am referring to 'hope' here...
:)
i havent seen 'ek ajnabee'
arjun rampal looks silly to me anyway...
:P

elfstone said...

:))

danger danger stranger is danger
watch it
mama told me dont be talking to stranger
stranger is danger
nazro se mili nazar aur yeh ho gaya ashar
meri roshni benoor ho gayi
ho bh h se gaye hum bhi
apne bekh mashro ho gayi
kabhi kabhi girls can make you cry
kabhi kabhi she can read your mind
kabhi kabhi seldom you cry
dil ko churka ke lagaya ek ajnabi
mama told me dont be talking to stranger
stranger is danger

Aditi said...

this sounds like the song from ek ajnabee just cuz of that line dil ko churake le gaya ek ajnabee
it was a bad song.. and yea arjun did look funny in the disc... he looks nice otherwise
=)

Sudarshan said...

Wow...great words!!! You're a very talented poet:-)

I wonder how some folks like you are so damn good at poetry:I can't compose even a short poem lol...:-)

elfstone said...

Well well, dont worry sudarshan
this isn't trinni'e 1st version
she sucked but she never gave up
and succeeded to make all this up!

Anonymous said...

"for example how u might hav felt lonely in spite of being in a crowd..becoz theres no one really who u wud relate to or someone relating to u!"

WHOA!! i completely understand. i can be in a crowd full of people i love... family, friends, the works... and yet i find myself so 'unattached' to all of them... i totally understand what you mean about being lonely in spite of being in a crowd.

i don't mind it, to be honest. i like my solitude... :)

OK now i come across as a loner, LOL, but i'm not really... :)

i will do so one of these days... :)

Anshuman said...

strangers we all are ... I guess the best thing to do is "love yourself" ..

btw finally ... i have http://.anshuman.info up and running :)

Kay Vee said...

@sudarshan:
thanks yaar sudarshan!
well i think u can write poetry too. i mentioned i started writing after a lotta years, rite? thats becoz my literature professor inspired us to do so...and i gave it a shot again! so can u!
thanks for stopping by!

@ o anonymous reader:
i am a loner too...i dont mind it all...tho sometimes i get into wishful thinking like "i wish was popular..."
but i think i best operate by being a loner or in couplets/triplets, coz that's my true self then!
:D

waiting....(for ur blog!)
:)
thanks for coming!

@anshuman:
long time no see, eh boy?
nice domain! tho i wud suggest u make it a bit more colurful and with illustrations!
ciao!
:)

AlterinG Abhishek said...

............ooooooooooooooooooh my gawd!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!




yes

all that exclamation.........
are the emotions more?
More than what the words say?
or
are the emotions in the words..more than the emotions of the writer!!

very interesting aspect of you...

Harsh said...

Somehow, I don't find your poem really abstract in tone. But like I said, no point dissecting a heartfelt song.
It's a decent one.

P.S: 'Achtung' technically means 'attention' and most properly should be used in warning signs.
But it's also used as a slang (think of something like "Check it out, dude!"). So "Achtung baby" would mean, "watch out baby" or something similar.

Aditi said...

Hows the computer doing??

Raghav said...

don't talk to strangers; is what our parents always thought us. Maybe we forget it on the way ;-)

Aparajita Paul said...

beautiful...

Anonymous said...

Very nicely expressed. If familiarity breeds contempt, strangers should be welcome for love. No?

Neer said...

whoa!! quite a thing here!! and loving a stranger has its own romance... the heartbreak is just incidental!

quite cool!

Anonymous said...

sigh!!! trust can easily be broken and once it is it's so hard to get it back. is this guy you talikng about seeing someone else? if he is or was i suggest that don't go back. just an advice from someone who has been there. all the best you will surely find someone who is worthy of your love.

Anonymous said...

sigh!!! trust can easily be broken and once it is it's so hard to get it back. is this guy you talikng about seeing someone else? if he is or was i suggest that don't go back. just an advice from someone who has been there. all the best you will surely find someone who is worthy of your love.

G said...

i'm a big fan of poetry, and i must say that was beautiful, at first i thought it was a song i hadn't heard of, that pretty much says it all i should think...

Anonymous said...

whom to love
but a stranger

the face in the mirror too
is a bit different each time

stranger loves stranger leaves
the soul grows

a bit of him takes roots
like clawing weeds

just shake them up
and buds do peep
ready to bloom
at the next naked breath

whom to love
but the stranger

walking bare feet
on a sharp edged knife
riding the rain and sleet
at the edge of the clouds

grab that saddle
and ride the life...